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I see you started a new forum that I find enticing and too tantalizing to ignore so here I am Bay seeking safe harbor at your new port O call.
To demonstrate how I understand this idea to manifest itself in behavior I will share two of my poems.
The first is called "Word Play"
A cunning linguist loves to play
With phrasing twisted meanings laid
On varying flavored flavors for the common way
Brewing enchantment’s startling ascendancy
Through turning language into lyric poetry
Tasting ecstasy part carnal with sublime portion
Incantations for intricate and delicate potion
Made of flower petals and rose shaped hearts
By motion found in secret places as physical as not
Emotion shows love’s composed of words as much as art
Human sexuality is mental and not just any body part
By word of mouth practices and cerebral dances
Verbal made smile’s the mind’s oral enhancers
Where thoughts’ expressed yet much more passes
Amid seduction’s mating rituals’ practiced prances
Keeping a sapient species alive long furthermore strong
By making children adults and sometimes for just song
This knotty logic’s found in every soul who’s willing
Being able, bound by such desire, growing tender and adoring
Full beyond expectation not just pregnant with a pause
Additionally such languid and luxurious praise is paid
Once our otherwise simple craft of barded congregation
Where in guarded moments of exquisite sharing
Idea and act make for a perfect pairing
Focusing attention on a single centered moment
Upon the deviation between what fires light the stars
With creation’s passions building burning desires
Igniting much more than just physical allure
Drawing moths into flaming deep temptation
Yet differing in reflection on what fires melt
Of both heaven and our hell into a mental meld
Poets define the logic of seduction not a rapist bent
Playing the serpent’s lyres for knowledge’s lent
Caring, spending time surviving amid amusement
Contrasting forced violation upon the bed
Which makes the bond of lurid get
Different from the magic of holy wed,
Is it the sanction of another one’s mindset
Or mutual respect most intimately felt?
To be more than fair this verse goes on
For attention needed must be paid upon
Poured and lathered and made to go on and on
What measure can make of such intent
T’is willingness and determination’s penchant
Gently touching, writhing, tintinnabulations vortex
Tonguing rhymes with ringing harmony of portent
For newly discovered never ending moments
Eternally existing infinite and instantly
Bringing all one’s desires into focus
To demonstrate how I understand this idea to manifest itself in behavior I will share two of my poems.
The first is called "Word Play"
A cunning linguist loves to play
With phrasing twisted meanings laid
On varying flavored flavors for the common way
Brewing enchantment’s startling ascendancy
Through turning language into lyric poetry
Tasting ecstasy part carnal with sublime portion
Incantations for intricate and delicate potion
Made of flower petals and rose shaped hearts
By motion found in secret places as physical as not
Emotion shows love’s composed of words as much as art
Human sexuality is mental and not just any body part
By word of mouth practices and cerebral dances
Verbal made smile’s the mind’s oral enhancers
Where thoughts’ expressed yet much more passes
Amid seduction’s mating rituals’ practiced prances
Keeping a sapient species alive long furthermore strong
By making children adults and sometimes for just song
This knotty logic’s found in every soul who’s willing
Being able, bound by such desire, growing tender and adoring
Full beyond expectation not just pregnant with a pause
Additionally such languid and luxurious praise is paid
Once our otherwise simple craft of barded congregation
Where in guarded moments of exquisite sharing
Idea and act make for a perfect pairing
Focusing attention on a single centered moment
Upon the deviation between what fires light the stars
With creation’s passions building burning desires
Igniting much more than just physical allure
Drawing moths into flaming deep temptation
Yet differing in reflection on what fires melt
Of both heaven and our hell into a mental meld
Poets define the logic of seduction not a rapist bent
Playing the serpent’s lyres for knowledge’s lent
Caring, spending time surviving amid amusement
Contrasting forced violation upon the bed
Which makes the bond of lurid get
Different from the magic of holy wed,
Is it the sanction of another one’s mindset
Or mutual respect most intimately felt?
To be more than fair this verse goes on
For attention needed must be paid upon
Poured and lathered and made to go on and on
What measure can make of such intent
T’is willingness and determination’s penchant
Gently touching, writhing, tintinnabulations vortex
Tonguing rhymes with ringing harmony of portent
For newly discovered never ending moments
Eternally existing infinite and instantly
Bringing all one’s desires into focus
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Re: Loving Language
Mon, January 5, 2004 - 1:12 PMBTW, the second is called "Loving Song" and I will bring that to you as soon as I am finished with it but I called it "Loving Language" before renaming it a song.
I hate typos and I always find the worst ones too late.
The line above that reads:
"On varying flavored flavors for the common way"
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Re: Loving Language
Mon, January 5, 2004 - 9:23 PMSo I wrote two instead of only one. Here are both:
Loving Language
Start looking for love
You’ll never know why
Revealed bladed grass
Bright children’s eyes
Filling our daily changing skies
With uneven tears of surviving lives
Once intense love
Instead found
Broken hearts
Not purchased
Sold or passed around
Loves’ freely precious
Wealth beyond measure
Returns not demanded
Honored with esteem
Loving Language
Unbecoming hate
Meaning ideas’ reflects
Beauty beyond reason
Love measured thought
Word with deed
Indeed alive feeling
Creation’s creed
Loving words
Worth shared
Instead wind whispers
Drawing uplifted eyes
Full feeling
Moonlit night sky
Ephemeral touching bite
Imagined hearts pounding inside
Tears
Like gentle rain
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Loving Song
Tue, January 6, 2004 - 10:21 AMAnnotate
Denotes
A crescendo mounted
Thundering pause
Dramatic space
Numbered lines making
One alone too
Another
Three Chord agreement
Seek infinite
Being
Forevermore
Born
Sand grains and cells
Cold heated fusion
Long lines of land
Living manmade shells
Sea salt swells
Over windswept earth
Broken hearted berths
Embodied lives linked
Seconds
Fecund laddered device
Won is a word
Deduce two
Three makes it whole
Four feeling harmonic rumble
Weird logic adagio
Rendering now allegro
Random nice action
Chance built meter
Loving healing helix
Doubling halves
By sexual coupling
Blame it
For all trouble
Name it
Victim
Or Victorious
Most certain 'a'
Protean proteomic problem
Remarkable New Attitudes
Daring Next Age
Gentle trickster within
Plot thickened endings
Twists turning dance
Into primal possibility
Once chaos
Twice ordered
Within
Without challenge
Senescence sets in
Without love
Hate
Balance resists
Reason With love
Faith
Finding grace
Purpose
Orchestrated meaning
Coded coda
Rhythm right wrong
Live life fulfilling
Weighs
Uplifting light
Chant our hearts out
Feeling belongs
Holding
Notes
Wet fires
Perspire
Flesh
Organs
Hearing
Touch
Singing
Platonic Forms
Defined Nearly Awake
Derivative
Nascent
Acquired
Desire Now Alive
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